I am a awesome funny girlI wonder if the war will ever stop
I hear kids outside screaming and laughing
I see myself meeting ray allen
I want to go to a boston celtics game
I am a awesome funny girl
I pretend that i'm with my dad
I feel my hair
I touch my paper
I worry that there will be another war
I cry when someone loved dies
I am a awesome funny girl
I understand that sometimes icant help the people that i reach out to
I say that i will travel
I dream that i will meet all the Boston Celtics PLAYERS
I try to be nice and funny
I hope that i will go to Australia
I am a awesome funny girl
really good job el, you have some spelling mistakes though
ReplyDeleteThat was good, but who's Ray Allen?
ReplyDeleteI like the honesty in this. Don't forget to capitalize proper names. I would also like to more about how your hair feels and the touch of paper.
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